相逢是首歌 (多伦多莱州联谊会通讯组)
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评论提交者 | Posted by 侨七郎 (IP: 81.225.208.230) on February 23, 2012 at 05:23 AM MST #
七绝·《莱州乡里韵味多》
走遍天涯岁月歌,
几重风雨几重波;
沱江水暖浪依旧,
乡里真情韵味多。
淡泊河
评论提交者 | Posted by 淡泊河 (IP: 75.50.191.36) on February 23, 2012 at 11:03 AM MST #
歡樂場面舞又歌,
高潮掀起几重波。
沱江水育兒千萬,
走遍天涯情感多。
评论提交者 | Posted by 客家人 (IP: 2.99.71.21) on February 23, 2012 at 02:15 PM MST #
應該是:
歡樂原場舞又歌,
高潮掀起幾重波。
沱江水育兒千萬,
走遍天涯情感多。
(因為-歡樂場面舞又歌,場字犯孤平,那是寫詩大忌,從句中第三字到第六字,平聲字不可單用也!否則犯孤平了)。
评论提交者 | Posted by 客家人 (IP: 2.99.71.21) on February 23, 2012 at 02:48 PM MST #
千里江山千里波。
沱江桃李天下滿,
客中舊夢書香多。
评论提交者 | Posted by 紅河 (IP: 82.236.178.131) on February 24, 2012 at 06:38 AM MST #
生來四海行雲多
千里江山千里波。
沱江桃李天下滿,
客中廳前書香歌。
评论提交者 | Posted by 紅河 (IP: 82.236.178.131) on February 24, 2012 at 06:47 AM MST #
加国枫城又欢歌,
师生情谊再掀波。
五十苍桑相逢喜,
恒流沱江情感多。
评论提交者 | Posted by 山水 (IP: 96.255.239.99) on February 24, 2012 at 11:34 AM MST #
群英荟萃,身手尽显!
各地校友,同宗同源;
繁荣园地。亲密无间!
评论提交者 | Posted by 沱江子 (IP: 50.100.208.229) on February 24, 2012 at 04:40 PM MST #